Sunday, 24 April 2011

Lord.


Lord.

Are you up there Lord.
Are you still up there
Seated at the right hand.
Are you up there Lord

Are you looking down Lord.
Can you see me
Can you see me.
Can you
.
Holding my dead child.
Dead from starvation.

Can you see me Lord.
Can you see me.
Can you.

Is she with you Lord
 Is she with you.
Is she.

david shelton


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11 comments:

  1. Anonymous17 June 2011 at 13:22

    A very, very compelling overture that speaks the burgeoning of perseverance. Wow!

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  2. planetcyberluz17 June 2011 at 15:13

    Powerful. Looking to the God without not the God within. Tigerbrite

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  3. Anonymous17 June 2011 at 23:38

    Oh, this fills me with emotion from the top of my head to the tips of my toes. How beautiful. How true. This hurts to read in a very good way.
    Amazing. Truly amazing.

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  4. Jingle18 June 2011 at 05:21

    beautiful.
    love the wonders.
    bless you.

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  5. Anonymous18 June 2011 at 07:25

    This is so heart-breaking really gets to you and the repetition enhances it perfectly

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  6. Dave Holloway18 June 2011 at 16:53

    It's like a look that say's everything.

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  7. Anonymous19 June 2011 at 15:03

    I'm deeply touched. The repetition is beautiful -- so real life. Wow poem :)

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  8. Ravenblack20 June 2011 at 00:39

    I'm amazed by this as it has an echoing effect.

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  9. Jack Edwards Poetry20 June 2011 at 13:29

    Beautiful poem with strong use of repetition.

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  10. Anonymous22 June 2011 at 19:15

    Very beautiful poem, it paints a picture with the words.

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  11. Unknown23 June 2011 at 13:02

    Powerful words, leave that ache. Great poetry! ~ Rose

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